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Random ramblings about a dove by ~Azusa3lover:iconAzusa3lover:



How I love
This buetiful dove
Did i crush her wings?
Never letting her sing?
What have I done
To this magestic one?

Will she ever fly again?
Away from the bad things I can't help but send?
I'd love to stop these sendings
And try rendering them inside
But I watch them ruin
I need to protect her and soon
Before this dove can't fly
Can't render itself in the sky
Before this dove ends up dieing

This diese that races inside me
Has never faltered or so you see
And it grew and divided
And never subsided
Took the dove over too
And even though I knew
There's nothing I could do

Others pick that dove up
Hold her in cupped hands
They seem to care as much as I
Yet she tries to makethier feeling die
Some try to drop her to the ground
But they knew I wouldn't stand and watch without a sound
I'd tear them to shreads if they hurt my love!
©2005-2009 ~Azusa3lover
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This is ramblings about a love almost forbiddin that's past thru such confusion and tests but still holds strong. The author feels that all that she did wrong has been fallen onto her lover when her lover made her feel better. The dove is my love and though others love her as well she loves me back. I don't know why it's a girl thats writing this about another girl it's soppose to be from a boy to a girl I'm just posting it how I felt at the moment and how I first wrote it. I think the love's a friendship holding strong. And my darling Krad knows why I wrote this I'm sure she won't tell you though ... about everything weve gone thru and how our freindship is forever strong.
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~chillysox:iconchillysox: Apr 26, 2005, 6:12:16 PM
First off, the concept of this poem makes no sense. and i've been writing poems for a very long time. you make waaay to many spelling and grammar errors, also. the flow is extremely choppy.
~Azusa3lover:iconAzusa3lover: May 9, 2005, 1:52:52 PM
Thank you... it was a really random poem and your right it makes no sense

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Since I am the Legendary Phntom thief (or I'm going to Acen as him) I will steal the heart of one and only one guy!!! This guy has blonde hair and is slightly homicidal his host is a young boy with blue hair that adors my red heared host!!! He is quite a
~vriz:iconvriz: May 10, 2005, 5:58:07 PM
I think it is beautiful. Despite the minor errors, the overall emotion of the poem is really strong. ^^
~Azusa3lover:iconAzusa3lover: May 16, 2005, 1:42:52 PM
oh thank you Ruby

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Since I am the Legendary Phntom thief (or I'm going to Acen as him) I will steal the heart of one and only one guy!!! This guy has blonde hair and is slightly homicidal his host is a young boy with blue hair that adors my red heared host!!! He is quite a
~Azusa3lover:iconAzusa3lover: May 17, 2005, 1:37:30 PM
grr..... this is like a public place isint it????

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Since I am the Legendary Phntom thief (or I'm going to Acen as him) I will steal the heart of one and only one guy!!! This guy has blonde hair and is slightly homicidal his host is a young boy with blue hair that adors my red heared host!!! He is quite a
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